yeah....
Well, that was a bit shit really.
You didnt even draw the sprites yourself?
It was too short.
The animation was too jumpy.
The ending was poor.
There plain just wasn't any plot (which i would understand if it was a demo reel or a political.... but it's not).
yeah.... just keep trying mate. When you look at my profile now compared to my old profile (nbh_old_movies) you'll see how bad i used to be. I find it better to draw a comic of the film before I make it, not a storyboard but like a story comic. It's also the best way to get ideas out of yourself.
Anyway, Good Luck
-Haris/NBH